The Essay Doesn't Count Toward Your 800, So Stop Burning Energy On It

By EMPOWERgmat on November 19, 2019

Say you sit down for a full practice test and the essay prompt pops up. You read it twice. You type a sentence, delete it, type it again. You wonder if "moreover" sounds smart enough. Thirty minutes later you have a lovely essay and a slightly fried brain. Then Quant starts, and by question 20 you are re-reading every prompt because your focus has wandered off somewhere.

I watch people do some version of this every single week. So here is the blunt verdict: your essay adds ZERO points to your 200 to 800. Not a few points. Zero.

The math nobody bothers to do

Your total GMAT score, the 200 to 800 number everyone talks about, comes from two sections only: Quant and Verbal. Quant is 31 questions in 62 minutes. Verbal is 36 questions in 65 minutes. That is 67 questions, and those 67 questions ARE your score. The essay (its official name is the Analytical Writing Assessment, or AWA) is one essay in 30 minutes, and whatever it earns, it never touches that 200 to 800 scale. You can see the layout on GMAC's own page on the sections, timing and format, and how the total is built on their page on how scores work.

Now stop reading for a second and answer this honestly: if a section cannot move your total score, how much of your BEST energy should it get?

The whole test runs about 3 hours and 7 minutes, plus two optional 8 minute breaks. That is a long event. Your brain is a fuel tank, and it does not refill halfway through. Quant and Verbal are adaptive question by question, which means the computer picks your next question based on how you are doing, and you cannot go back to change an answer. Every question counts while you are on it. A tired brain on question 30 of Verbal costs you real points. A tired brain on the last paragraph of your essay costs you nothing on the 800.

You also get to pick one of three section orders. If you choose an order that puts the essay ahead of Quant and Verbal, then every ounce you pour into it is fuel that is gone before the events that actually count.

A runner jogging an easy warm-up lap while saving a big reserve of energy for two large races waiting ahead. — Jog the side event. Save the sprint for the races that count.

Solid is the target. Brilliant is a trap.

I am NOT telling you to blow off the essay. It still gets scored, and there is no reason to hand in a mess. But there is a huge gap between "solid" and "brilliant," and that gap costs you energy you need elsewhere.

So decide what you want MORE: a gorgeous essay that nobody adds to your total, or three extra correct answers in Quant? You cannot have unlimited fuel for both. Pick.

The answer is autopilot. Autopilot means you build one plan, drill it a few times, and on Test Day you just run it. No decisions. No staring at a blank screen. Decisions burn fuel, so the fewer you make on the essay, the more you have left for the 67 questions that matter.

What the essay actually asks you to do

You get a short argument, often a paragraph from a memo or an ad, and you write about how well it is reasoned. You are NOT asked whether you agree with it. You are asked to find the holes in the logic.

If you have done any Critical Reasoning (the Verbal questions where you weaken, strengthen or find the assumption in an argument), you already have this skill. The essay is Critical Reasoning with paragraphs. An assumption is a gap the author never proves but needs to be true for the conclusion to work. Find three of those gaps and you have an essay.

Try it

The following appeared in a memo from the manager of a coffee chain:

"Last spring, our downtown store began offering live music on Friday nights. That same spring, Friday sales at the downtown store rose by 20 percent compared with the spring before. To increase sales across the whole chain, all twelve of our stores should begin offering live music on Friday nights."

Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. Before you write a word of the essay, grab paper and find THREE assumptions the manager is making. Give yourself 5 minutes.

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Step 1: Break the argument into pieces on paper. Do not do this in your head. Your notes might look like this:

C (conclusion): all 12 stores add Friday music, so chain sales go up
E (evidence): downtown added music, then downtown Friday sales rose 20%

Step 2: Hunt for the gaps between E and C.

A1: The music CAUSED the rise. Two things happening in the same spring does not prove one caused the other. Maybe a new office building opened nearby, prices changed or the weather was nicer.
A2: The other 11 stores are like downtown. A downtown Friday night crowd may be nothing like a suburban store's crowd.
A3: Higher Friday sales means higher TOTAL sales. Maybe customers just moved their visits from Thursday to Friday. And the plan says nothing about what the musicians cost.

Step 3: For each gap, note what evidence would fix it. Sales from nearby stores without music over the same spring (A1). Data on who shops at each store (A2). Weekly sales and profit, not just Friday sales (A3).

The trap: most people start writing about whether live music is a good idea, or whether they like coffee shops with bands. That is your opinion, and the prompt did not ask for it. The other trap is listing six flaws in one sentence each. Three gaps, each explained with a fix, beats six thin ones every time.

Notice what just happened. Five minutes of notes gave you the whole essay. The rest is filling a frame you already built.

The autopilot frame

Same five paragraphs, every time:

Intro: two or three sentences. State the conclusion and say it rests on assumptions the author never supports.
Body 1: the first assumption, why it might not hold, and what evidence would make it stronger.
Body 2: same pattern, second assumption.
Body 3: same pattern, third assumption.
Conclusion: two sentences. The argument is weak as written, and here is what would make it stronger.

A simple time plan: about 5 minutes on notes, about 20 minutes writing, and the last few minutes for a quick scan for typos. If you want more detail on the scoring side, read our tips for scoring high on the GMAT AWA. Then come back and keep the frame boring. Boring is the point.

Five empty stacked boxes of the same shape being filled one by one, like a mold waiting for material. — Build the frame once. On Test Day you just fill it in.

The mistakes I see over and over

Writing a brand new essay structure every time. You invent a new opening, a new order, a new style. That is a fresh set of decisions on every attempt. INSTEAD: use the same five paragraph frame on every practice essay until you can set it up without thinking.
Skipping the essay on full practice tests. This sounds like it fits my point. It does NOT. If you skip it, your practice tests are shorter than the real thing, and your stamina numbers are fake. You have to train for the FULL event. INSTEAD: do the essay on every full practice test, in autopilot mode, so you learn what it feels like to start Quant or Verbal with the right amount of fuel left.
Arguing your opinion. The prompt asks how well the argument is reasoned, not whether you agree. INSTEAD: attack the logic. Every body paragraph names an assumption, not a feeling.
Chasing fancy words and big length. Thesaurus words and extra paragraphs burn time and fuel. INSTEAD: three clear gaps, explained in plain sentences, each with the evidence that would fix it.
Doing the notes in your head. This is pride, and it costs you on the essay just like it costs you on Quant. You lose track, you repeat a point, you re-read the prompt three times. INSTEAD: write C, E, A1, A2, A3 on paper every time. It takes seconds.
Writing practice essays every night. I'll bet the hours you have spent polishing essays are MORE than the hours you have spent reviewing your Quant mistakes. INSTEAD: write a few practice essays to lock in the frame, then move those hours to Quant and Verbal, where the points live.

Your move, today

Pick one argument from a Critical Reasoning question you have already done. Set a 30 minute timer. Write the essay using the frame above: 5 minutes of notes on paper, then the five paragraphs, then a quick scan. When the timer goes off, stop.

Then, without a break, do a timed set of Quant questions. Watch how much focus you have left. If the essay drained you, the frame is not on autopilot yet. Run it again next week until the essay feels like a warm-up lap, and save the real race for the 67 questions that build your 800.